This piece of art work is truly amazing! The way you drew the bird creatures is stunning and whimsical, yet also creepy in a good way. The girl playing guitar in the center brings a balance to this; I see it as the focal point. And another place I look instantly towards on this picture is the skeletal creature on the bottom right corner. The fact that it has no color is amazing. But what I think it's missing is maybe a little splash of color somewhere? You don't have to take this advice but I think it would be nice to color all the birds eyes some bright color and leave everything else how it is. But overall I cannot complain, this is definitely a lot better than anything I could ever dream of doing! Wonderful idea, wonderful drawing!
oh, thank you SO much for writing a critique.
I agree with the splash of colour thing. I just couldn't decide where, you know? There is also the fear of changing something about a picture and then not being pleased with the result. I will most likely give the original to the commissioner as it is, but who knows? I might add in some colour to this version sometime.
Again, thanks for taking the time to write this. It's a wonderful thing to see after a long day