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Ballad for the Birds by TheSpyderQueen

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This piece of art work is truly amazing! The way you drew the bird creatures is stunning and whimsical, yet also creepy in a good way. The girl playing guitar in the center brings a balance to this; I see it as the focal point. And another place I look instantly towards on this picture is the skeletal creature on the bottom right corner. The fact that it has no color is amazing. But what I think it's missing is maybe a little splash of color somewhere? You don't have to take this advice but I think it would be nice to color all the birds eyes some bright color and leave everything else how it is. But overall I cannot complain, this is definitely a lot better than anything I could ever dream of doing! Wonderful idea, wonderful drawing!
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TheSpyderQueen Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
oh, thank you SO much for writing a critique.

I agree with the splash of colour thing. I just couldn't decide where, you know? There is also the fear of changing something about a picture and then not being pleased with the result. I will most likely give the original to the commissioner as it is, but who knows? I might add in some colour to this version sometime.

Again, thanks for taking the time to write this. It's a wonderful thing to see after a long day :)
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MathTicksMeOff Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Long day eh? I can imagine. This is truly beautiful :meow: I love it so much!! It probably took a while to make!
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TheSpyderQueen Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
it took awhile to complete, due to lack of time to work on it...about a week in total...
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MathTicksMeOff Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whoa! Impressive! :nod:
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TheSpyderQueen Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
thanks :)
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MathTicksMeOff Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome :)
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